Creative Writing
Prose
Creative writing is intended
to entertain. Good creative writing also contains a message - a
statement about life or the nature of mankind. To entertain it must
be interesting and "alive."
For a story to entertain,
several elements must be present. First, something must "happen." In
other words, there must be a situation which demands a resolution and
the situation must be resolved. These elements are called the
"plot" and the "resolution." The moment of resolution is called the
"climax." The message is called the
"theme."
- Example: A man watches as his neighbor and
his cousin become entangled in a dangerous relationship which
leads to three deaths.
This is, of course, the plot
of The Great
Gatsby, by F Scott
Fitzgerald. What happens? This statement tells us. An author needs to
understand what happens in the story in order to develop the
plot.
What about the theme? That is the message about life or the nature of
man.
- Gatsby shows us that a
man who truly loves another is willing to give his life and ask
for nothing in return.
However
This is not to imply that
writing a story must
start with plot and
theme. Creative writing is an individual
pursuit, and each writer must find her or his own method within the
process.The author may choose to start by creating characters and
then deciding on a plot.
- Characters
- The characters are the
people in the stories. There are many types of characters and the
writer must be certain that she understands each character as a
person and what each character does in the plot.
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- Narrator: The narrator tells the story to
the reader.
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- Protagonist: A story must have a character who tries to
accomplish something. Without this element nothing can happen.
This character might be trying to win something,or find something,
or defeat something. This character is the protagonist.
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- Antagonist: The antagonist tries to stop the protagonist. The antagonist wants something in opposition to the wants of the
protagonist and both of them cannot win. Both, however, can
lose. Here's the tricky part - the protagonist and antagonist can be the same person.
Here's how
(example)
- The protagonist wants a date with a newcomer to
town. The protagonist is afraid to ask this newcomer to a movie or
dance. The newcomer is willing, but the protagonist is not aware and, therefore, does
not ask. The only thing which stops the protagonist from
succeeding is her/his own fear of rejection.
Conflict
Conflict occurs when two
forces (the protagonist and antagonist)) work against each other.
Recognized conflicts include:
- Man (the generic term for
a protagonist) vs Man
- Man vs Himself
- Man vs Nature (weather,
disease, etc)
- Man vs the Supernatural
(gods, ghosts, evil beings, etc)
- Man vs Fate (a
predestined course which cannot be changed)
Endings
An ending to a story is
tricky business in that it must do two things which are difficult to
accomplish together:
- The ending must come as
something of a surprise to the reader
- The ending must seem to
be the only reasonable ending possible.
NOTE: Avoid trick endings. These are
endings which are not reasonable in our world. Safes do not tend to
fall from airplanes and land on bad guys who are escaping from the
police. Endings to avoid:
- The Seventh
Cavalry: This is the
ending in which the protagonist is suddenly saved by a miraculous
appearance of some hero who appears in the nick of time.
- The Dog
Story: This ending
depends on the author withholding and important piece of
information. For instance, the story is told as if the
protagonist is an ill treated son of parents who make him sleep in
the damp basement, but in the last paragraph we learn that the
protagonist is actually the family dog.
- It Was A
Dream: The situation
is terrible and no escape is possible, so the character wakes up
from a dream. Or, any other variation of the dream ending. If
the story is a dream it should have sufficient foreshadowing to
indicate this.
Poetry
Poetry should say something
about man's situation or the nature of the world. This can be done
through metaphors, allusions, images or other devices.
Poetry should paint mental
pictures. It should use sound to create mood.
Poetry should avoid
wordiness.
Poetry need not rhyme, but
may do so. If a poem rhymes, it should also have a steady
meter.
Reading
A good writer is, by
nature, a reader. Reading keeps the mind alive and active and keeps
the writer tuned into the ideas which are being presented by others.
Do not copy others, but learn from what they do.
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